tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749315246298231103.post2268958733244630409..comments2024-03-28T00:31:57.850-06:00Comments on Twelve Makes a Dozen: Kiylee's Christmas - Chapter 4Bossyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06075110454901078505noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749315246298231103.post-88760183817015594922013-02-05T16:18:23.167-07:002013-02-05T16:18:23.167-07:00Marci's right, it can never hurt to have longe...Marci's right, it can never hurt to have longer chapters. Inexperienced, first-book authors (me included!) have a hard time writing longer chapters or more action. It can never hurt to have longer conversations, even about things that don't relate directly to the story line. And more action? Kids can almost never get enough action, believe me! Like someone suggested in the 1st or 2nd Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6749315246298231103.post-43744265312788016272013-02-05T08:53:39.082-07:002013-02-05T08:53:39.082-07:00You probably could've predicted this comment, ...You probably could've predicted this comment, but I hate waiting! I want longer chapters. Or all of them. At once! I'm so intrigued by this story.Marcihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17074714649929546094noreply@blogger.com